Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)

[Roul]

Hello guys.  It's been a very long time since I have posted or interacted here, but after months I have finally been able to contribute something I promised a few of you guys .

Where I've been
I do feel bad that I haven't been active here, and I'd like to quickly explain what's been going on for those who may have been wondering what's up.  To begin, shortly after I graduated, there was one specific thing that hit me pretty hard and still sticks with me right now.   On top of the numerous times my partner refused to put in effort in our relationship, not only did I get cheated on, but she attempted to defame me towards other friends on top of straight-up cussing me out and sending specific threats if she were to not casually be accepted back into my friend circle.  This was especially taxing considering this happening shortly after my family's dog passed away, which also happened during the first few weeks I had to initiate the breakup.

On a more positive note, I've been working on many personal projects and have been making great progress.

Where I've been: Short version
Lost my pet, got cheated on, got caught up in real life stuff and projects, but I'm alright as I can be now .

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Comic & Individual Pages
Now with my update off my chest,  I have finally regained my motivation and discipline to complete something I teased a few months back.  Here is an extended comic featuring an iconic pony that many of you are likely familiar with.  I hope you enjoy the comic despite it arriving much later than I wished.

Note: All images total to 85MB, which may be too large to view all at once if using a mobile phone (such as mine ).  To save your data, I have elected to not share thumbnail previews.

Summary/Synopsis
Margo's 764th day-in-a-row of no sneezing is ruined after an unfortunate run-in with a crazy, psycho bunny.

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Special Thanks and Notes
• @Anyponedrawn for permission to draw Margo.
• @Rainberry for permission to draw Raine (cameo).

As another update, I am currently (highly) occupied creating my own video game, which means tons of original assets (music, art, characters, gameplay, etc).  I am expecting to be extremely busy; however, I may also stop by and say hello once in a while  .

P.S.: Thank you to all who pinged me in the past months.  Although I didn't respond, I did highly appreciate the best wishes!

[timmelon]

Thank you! It's a good long comic with an epic anime battle!
Of course, I still don't understand the point of a non-sneeze marathon... from one side, and shoving a full vial of Chhinkni (overloading all the sensors), from the other side.
For me, at least one snee per day is needed just to keep the nose fresh, and the best way to induce is to aim a tiny particle right into the most sensitive area (some magic can be used for this) so the victim has no time to react and the sneeze is built purely on natural reflex without any playing .

[Anyponedrawn]

HOLY MOLEY!!! This is huge!!!!!  This is amazing!  You did such an amazing thing here.  I am utterly shocked and super impressed!!! Margo not sneezing for that long though, that is pure blasphemy. Lol!!! At least it ended so well!! The level of detail and backgrounds and shading... like seriously, it all is a huge step up!  Your Margo is very pretty looking as well!  Also the action and references are great!  It's like silly and doesn't take itself too seriously, I love your humor! RAINE and SMILES references!!! Also the costume by the rabbit had me laughing. Awesome job on this massive project!!

On the personal level, sorry you are and had to deal with all that drama.  It stinks when stuff like that happens, especially when related to relationships.  I hope this is improving for you though. 

[Yourtourguidefortoday]

Margo is always best pony

Also, sorry about what happened.

Stay strong buddy. 

[MasterXtreme]

Why does this rabbit want to make her sneeze so bad?  Who are they and why are they on this mission?  How on earth did Margo make it 764 days without sneezing?  Is this an alternative universe?  Has there been a time break?   Hahahaha!  The Matrix jump, the corny lines, this was perfectly perfect!  I truly loved this!!!  Superb work on this comic! 

I'm sorry for what happened to you, but I am very happy you have motivation again and I hope you keep doing great things like this.  Remember in your low points in life, PSF is there for ya if you need us.  Great work on the comic!!! I know this is going to be a huge hit that randomly was released on a Tuesday night during a work week.  Give it some time, people will see it, and it will explode!

[Rainberry]

I'm sorry for everything that happened to you.  I am happy to hear you are better.  It is through hardship we become stronger, if we allow ourselves to learn and grow from it.

Oh my goodness! Margo withholding from sneezing for so long?  Surely this must be a dream!  The comic was drawn and colored beautifully and I noticed several references to things which made me smile!  What made me smile huge was seeing how sneezy she became as she was taken down by this masked villain!! But I also honestly felt bad for her. She seemed so proud of not sneezing (even a bit arrogant at times).  I don't know why the bunny was making her sneeze and why he wanted to so badly.  He also said to see him as a hero?  Hmmm.  Is there something deeper to this? 

Now what made me smile EVEN MORE was the end! I was in it!  My pony was in the comic!!!   Thank you for sharing this beautifully made comic! It's super long and super good!  You did an awesome job!

[Smiles2us]

I got a name drop!  I told Margo to watch out about that trail! It's not safe!! Lol!

I loved that crazy set of situations and how good the aim of that bunny was!  Throwing chikinni (spell) and having it go perfectly in her nostril!  That bunny has good aim!  Also the situations were quite frankly ridiculous in a good way! You made the comic really funny and it could actually work as a non fetish comic, because it's silly enough people would probably laugh at it and wonder why all this was happening. Super stuff! I loved it.

I hope things keep getting better for you.  We are here for you if you ever need to talk.  Many have used us before to share their troubles and I'm sure many more will in the future. We got your back.  You're PSF fam. 

[Kiwi]

Woah! This is incredible Kmlp! Beautiful and detailed. I love the progression of this comic and I must say this Margo seems different in personality from the one I knew in the past.  Granted this is the most we've ever seen of her.  It seems when she doesn't sneeze, she becomes far more confident in herself... though maybe this isn't the same Margo?  A different take on a classic.   I got to say though, her hair and eyes were lovely in your comic.  Her break down and sneezing fit were really nice with lots of good sneezing material, especially that sneeze towards us near the end.

[Bloogap]

Very fun, very silly, all around good time.  Not having a single sneeze in almost 2 years sounds impossible, especially for someone sneeze prone as Margo haha.

Best of luck on your future endeavours!

[Crimson Crest]

I want to feel bad for Margo, but she should be happy. After all, now that her no–sneeze streak has been broken, she doesn't have to worry about maintaining it! Besides, sneezing is completely normal, and a good thing at that.

[Blurr]

Holy damn this sure was something to read. Amazing job with every single bit of this. And I’m sorry about alll that crap that happened to you. You didn’t deserve it.

[Silverwing]

Margo seems kinda snotty here in her attitude.  Not sure what to think about her, but I am even more curious why this bunny wants her to sneeze?  What is the shady background organization who wants to make her sneeze? lol! Seriously, great comic!  So much content here and some super sneezes! Very wet.

[Smiles2us]

I keep re-reading through the comic and keep finding new things to examine.  It's so well made and put together!

[Spiffmin]

This is awesome! Thank you for taking the time to draw this awesome mass of comic good-ness! For a pony who is so sneezy, how did she not sneeze for so long? Also the action sequences were super fun to look through! You'd make a good comic artist!

[RainySunshine]

This is GREAT Kmlp! The expressions, the scenario, and just the overall tone of it.  It's quite funny and has tons of good sneeze content too! Great job and well worth the wait.  The colors, the backgrounds, shading, it all looks great. I love this and love seeing your art.   I hope things continue to get better for you after that rough period too.  That's a tough thing to go through.