Okay... the redhead is seated in an armchair by herself in pans. 4 and 8 , but in pan. 9 she's suddenly moved to the sofa. What, does her sneeze cause her to magically appear in a different seat?
Is Blonde Girl psychic? She replies
aloud to Brunette Girl's
thought bubble.
There must be two sofas in the room, as one is by a window (pan 1) and the other presumably faces it, with the far wall in view behind it (pan 9).
In panel seven Pigtail Girl just suddenly appears out of nowhere. A directional arrow or two between the panels would help, because it looks like she's blessing Blondie
before she sneezes in pan. 6. Also, she's in a wooden-backed chair, which looks to be across the room from the fireplace...but suddenly she's in the armchair Red was in for the first half of the strip. Is that why she looks so shocked in the second-to last panel?
Continuity gremlins fairly abound. Sure, it's not entirely A.I.'s fault--I've made my share of mistakes in hand-drawn art, too--but, really, a good editorial once-over should catch such goofs before you go to press. I mean, this is a cruel world where
the i and the o are so close together on a standard keyboard.
Always double-check.
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