Rainbow Dash Sneezes (F)

[Anyponedrawn]

I don't know.  Not really feeling it.  But hey, here is my first pic of 2017.  I think I squished her body too much from the force of the sneeze.  Thoughts and criticisms welcome.


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[1234]

Should've called it "Rainbow Dash Explodes". XD

I don't think it's a bad pic at all. Nice sneeze.

[Anyponedrawn]

*Fist bumps Numbers*

Thank you. 

[Death Blossom]

Hmm, very nice. I can see where you're feeling iffy. Not sure if it looks odd because of being too squished, because there aren't like squish lines, so it just kinda looks like her body is too short. But nice splash and mess. Very dank.

[Anyponedrawn]

I think her head looks too big, and it's hard to tell, but her body is somewhat angled to the ... *Shifts perspective in my head* to the right.  So she looks even shorter because of that.  Maybe I should have just stuck with the same boring angle the show always sticks with. 

[Silverwing]

I see what you mean, APD.  It's good, but it might be the angling of her back end that makes it odd.  You can tell if you look closely her rump is turned a different direction then the rest of her, but a passing glance, which most people do, won't notice that. 

[Anyponedrawn]

Yeah, I will stick to the old angles of the yo olde tyme.  Thank you for your input. 

[Silverwing]

What is cool is you new "Design cue" in the explosive sneezes, which literally have explosive lines around the nose.  I think that is kinda neat.   I might have to employ that due a bit and see what happens.  I have a bunch of art I wanted to share today, but you beat me to it.

[Anyponedrawn]

Dude, go share your stuff.  I'm all cool with that.  I'd be fine with this pic being buried, because the more I look at it, the more I dislike it.

Thank you about the explosive sneeze lines.  I just sort of picked that up. 

[Silverwing]

Alright, cool.  I got some jazz to post. 

[Umbreon]

Find this picture really cute nice colour and sneeze.

[Anyponedrawn]

Thank you, Jolteon!  Glad you like it. 

[Soda]

I don't see anything wrong with this.  It's very good and well done.  Thank you for posting it, APD! 

[Wolfwood]

Hey looks guys, it's Rainbow Crash!  *Points and laughs*  Harr harr harr!

Liking this one, APD.  I don't know where you are coming from with this one not being "up to par" or whatever, because I think it looks great.

[Death Blossom]

Maybe I should have just stuck with the same boring angle the show always sticks with.

Going back and rereading comments, because I'm a creep. I can't help but feel there's some resentment in there? Or bitterness? Salt? It just seemed a bit odd from you when I first read it but didn't get to comment. Are you okay?