Sunset Shimmer Feeling Comic (F)

[Silverwing]

Equestria Girls version of Sunset Shimmer in this comic.  Hope you like it.  I may fix up the last panel with a new version, and if I do, I will share it here.

Comic

[Anyponedrawn]

YES!!!!  The people spoke and you delivered!  Looks great.  I really love her expressions.  That false start was wonderfully tossed in there! 

[Silverwing]

Thanks.  Not happy with the ending.  I will probably remove her stifle-ish sneeze and just make her have a post-sneeze face.  

[Umbreon]

I absolutely adore this the build up and detail.

[1234]

Silverwing. You have made an awesome piece that many users requested, and therefore will be forever remembered on PSF for being... a great artist. Thank you.

[Soda]

I know that feeling!  I know it all too well!  What a fun comic!  I really like how you made her character and she always looks wonderful when you draw her. 

[Death Blossom]

But your Sunsets usually have the clenched, stifled sneeze. It's a Sunset staple. I kinda like that little headcanon you had for her in earlier pieces.

I like how she let the first one loose, must've felt good especially after that false start and it going away. But then back to stifling, because I guess it's her thig lol. Loved her expression when it went away. So annoyed and just "dang it". Was good. And all her ther expressions were great, the first two, her trying to coax it out, sniffling and wanting it to happen. I've had that feel. Then when it finally happens, nice reserved amount of mess. Not like splurge, but nice mist detail, and then the little snot haha. This was really nice, Silver I really liked it ^^ thanks for listening to us!

[Silverwing]

Jolteon - Thank you!  I'm really happy you commented and enjoy it.

Numbers - And you will forever be known as Numbers.   Thank you, Artichoke...errrr...Numbers. 

Soda - Soda Pop!  Thanks! 

LP - Of course!  I love you guys!  Thank you for the little review there, I loved reading it and hearing your input. 

[Blurr]

Hey hey! The sunset lip bite sneeze! I love seeing that drawn on her by you. The buld up is beautifully drawn to as well as her face when the sneeze won't come and slipped from her. Then BOOM! Instant double. Very nice Silver. Very very nice work from you.

[Wolfwood]

This was awesome!  This is what I am talking about when I think of Silverwing quality in comics!  I love how you not only teased her, but the reader with that false start that went away!  How horrible of you!!!  Then she is treated with an awesome double, the first so good, she couldn't hold it back! 

[Smiles2us]

I wanna give her a big squeezing hug for some reason!  I love that false start more then anything, I think.  I haven't seen someone do that in our corner of the fandom in a comic!  That was absolutely lovely!  She even was aimed down ready to sneeze and it didn't happen.  Also her signature stifled sneeze, love it!  I really liked how after that false start, the sneeze built up very big she had to let it go. 

[Death Blossom]

I'm pretty sure there've been false start comics before... But it is nice to see. Not done often. So it's a nice rarity because we get more fun expressions.

[Smiles2us]

I'm not sure how much work goes into a comic, but I know it's more then single quick sketches!  I always appreciate them and their extra drawing goodness. 

[Death Blossom]

Comics are life. Because they bring a sense of story to still frames.
I've always been more of a fan of sneeze writing than just pictures. But comics have best of both worlds and I love them for it ^^

[Smiles2us]

Imagine... some of our best sneezefic stories.... with pictures... or in comic form, like manga or graphic novel, or whatever.  It would be SICK!