Sneezy Heather Poodle (Anonymous Commission, F)

[Ari-Dynamic]

http://bestheelofalltime.deviantart.com/art/Commission-Comic-Udderly-Ridiculous-Fun-p2-679983157

http://bestheelofalltime.deviantart.com/art/Commission-Comic-Udderly-Ridiculous-Fun-p1-679983171

Backstory: Heather is a poodle fur character I created via role-playing, and now she's been appearing in commissions at requests of clients which is pretty neat. These commissions involve sneezing but of the "characters working together in disguise, or sharing the costume" variety.

Comic Story: Heather and friend are performing in a play that require the two-person cow outfit. As a practical special effect, she's also holding onto the milk inside. Unfortunately, the urge to sneeze kicks in... leading to some breathy build-ups and some inflation from the inside.



The client encouraged me to post it.

[Umbreon]

This is pretty cute and well drawn like the blushing.

[Darrin]

Well done, and nice versions. Really nice colors and fun cartoonyness.

Is that... milk?  

If I had to complain... my complaint would be this... I DON'T GET TO SEE the probably amazing build up and sneeze!  Lol!  But it's really good.   nice touch showing the tail will tickle from the kitty cat in the second panel too. 

[Anyponedrawn]

Really good drawings!  Great comic.  I do like the poodle girl and the cat one.  Do you have some other comics of them? 

May I just ask a question of curiosity?  Why the two variants of cows?  

[MasterXtreme]

Great comic, Patri!  Did a great job! 

[Ari-Dynamic]

Well done, and nice versions. Really nice colors and fun cartoonyness.

Is that... milk?  

If I had to complain... my complaint would be this... I DON'T GET TO SEE the probably amazing build up and sneeze!  Lol!  But it's really good.   nice touch showing the tail will tickle from the kitty cat in the second panel too.

Hehe, yeah, that's true. XD Unfortunately that's how the 'totem pole trench' stuff usually works; exception being if they open up the costume mid-way to reveal the sneeze present. The client wanted the first two panels to be very specifically designed as such, otherwise I would've allowed her to appear in some capacity.

[Ari-Dynamic]

Really good drawings!  Great comic.  I do like the poodle girl and the cat one.  Do you have some other comics of them? 

May I just ask a question of curiosity?  Why the two variants of cows?

I have Heather and another friend of hers dressing up. ^^ However the sneeze comes from an elephant girl they danced with at a party.

I'd like to do something with Heather outside of the situations she's being commissioned to appear in, or at least some 'Original Character Bio' type thing. Would be fun to let folks know about her and her past, sneezy things she likes, and so on.

[Ari-Dynamic]

OP updated; client didn't mind it being shared after all. ^^

[Anyponedrawn]

Thanks for the info!

[Ari-Dynamic]

No problem! :3 Next time I'll ask my client (he does want to do more in the future) if we'll see Heather on the inside sometime. :3

[Smiles2us]

Really nice work Patri!  You do a great job.

[Ari-Dynamic]

Thank you :3