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« Reply #30 on: 2017-08-22 21:06:07 »
Yea, I didn't really get the joke the original was trying to say, but thats okay, because the pic itself was well done.
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« Reply #31 on: 2017-08-22 21:08:50 »
To make it short, she's half bat-pony, and when she sneezed, she went "SKREEE", embarrassing herself. ;)
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« Reply #32 on: 2017-08-22 21:09:33 »
Yeah, that part I understand. Maybe that was the joke? Cuz she's trying to be formal ish or something but she ends up letting out a SKREEE
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« Reply #33 on: 2017-08-22 21:11:35 »
Ooooh, I get it.  Skrreee, the sounds bats are supposed to make according to people. ;D  Thanks, Numbers.
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« Reply #34 on: 2017-08-22 22:18:54 »
The original is really nice.  I don't really get the joke though?  Screeee?  That's how she sneezes?  ;D  HA!  Ok.  Really like the expressions and the build up, lacking in spray.

Now the edit was just the right amount of everything.  The colors were nicely done too!  I noticed some minor tweaks and changes to the expressions, but it looked for the better!  Nice messy mess about to shoot out.  Would love to see where it went and all.  Really nice!
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« Reply #35 on: 2017-08-22 22:22:27 »
I think it's the first panel that confuses people. She's actually answering an ask on the Tumblr linked in the OP. I guess the sneeze was pretty much unrelated to that answer, and was there for... fun.

It didn't shoot very far, pretty much all of it wound up on her muzzle. And her mane. XD

Thanks, Grape. :)
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« Reply #36 on: 2017-08-22 22:26:31 »
I noticed how the smart artists called it a revision.  The goofy artist (me) called it an edit. :P  lol! 

This topic for mucho attention!
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« Reply #37 on: 2017-08-22 22:27:25 »
I'm goofy too, then. ;p
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« Reply #38 on: 2017-08-22 22:28:46 »
I called it an edit too.  I guess the REAL artists know how to make everything sound better in their line of work. ;D  Lol!  But edit isn't a friendly word.  It is quite harsh.  Revision softens it up and sounds nicer. 
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« Reply #39 on: 2017-08-22 22:29:28 »
Yeah. "Revision". Awright. :)

Lemme fix the title. ;p Done.
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« Reply #40 on: 2017-08-22 22:30:33 »
Some people would be silly and get mad at an edit.  Revision, they might not think of the connotations behind it. ;)  Just a heads up.
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« Reply #41 on: 2017-08-22 22:31:05 »
I know you are right too, Grape, ;D  You're the wordsmith here.
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« Reply #42 on: 2017-08-22 22:31:15 »
I guess so. Thanks for the warning. :))
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« Reply #43 on: 2017-08-22 22:33:28 »
First art project by Numbers was an astounding hit.  43 posts in his topic of praise and glory!  Good job!
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« Reply #44 on: 2017-08-22 22:33:57 »
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I guess so. Thanks for the warning. :))
You are welcome. :)
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