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« on: 2017-12-25 19:44:22 »

This was inspired by that one scene from Putt-Putt Saves the Zoo :P

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« Reply #1 on: 2017-12-25 23:50:53 »

The "sneeze stopper" becomes the sneezer!  I always find these scenarios fun.  Also good work on this really long comic with lots of different actions, movements, expressions, and color. :)
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« Reply #2 on: 2017-12-26 16:35:23 »

Nice long comic, Sarah. 
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« Reply #3 on: 2017-12-26 18:30:33 »

Try to work on making your lines smoother. Maybe try adding some shading? And perhaps draw their full bodies instead of long necks with heads? ^^
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« Reply #4 on: 2017-12-26 19:54:50 »

Try to work on making your lines smoother. Maybe try adding some shading? And perhaps draw their full bodies instead of long necks with heads? ^^
I don't actually know how to shade it in a way that looks good. ^^;

And I could draw their full bodies, but I didn't have enough space and I didn't want to risk breaking the lines that separate each panel from one another ^^;
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« Reply #5 on: 2017-12-26 21:55:48 »

Here's a tip too.  It is best to decide how many panels you want to have, then draw the panels FIRST before you draw the pictures.  It will help you control your sizes.

I saw some improvement with varied expressions and movements though!  Thanks for sharing, Hun!
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« Reply #6 on: 2017-12-27 06:15:11 »

Try to work on making your lines smoother. Maybe try adding some shading? And perhaps draw their full bodies instead of long necks with heads? ^^
I don't actually know how to shade it in a way that looks good. ^^;

And I could draw their full bodies, but I didn't have enough space and I didn't want to risk breaking the lines that separate each panel from one another ^^;

Also, maybe try looking at pictures of cats to improve your anatomy-- especially the leg size and head shape. Just a few tips.
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« Reply #7 on: 2017-12-27 10:00:38 »

Awww, cute! I love that scene from Putt-Putt. :D Thanks for sharing! I like how Dark holds onto the other cat while the snow is crashing down.

Edit: the nostalgia got to me so I found a walkthrough of the game and found the part where the avalanche happens. The time is around 8:53. I love Pep's little nose twitch -- it's a shame he didn't sneeze!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3cnFViTQZIQ
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« Reply #8 on: 2017-12-27 16:33:16 »

I've always liked situations like this though!  So that is a bonus to me.  Fun comic here, Sarah!  Nicely done and it makes me think of the holidays simply because of the snow and their scarfs. 
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« Reply #9 on: 2017-12-27 17:06:15 »

Thanks for sharing! I like how Dark holds onto the other cat while the snow is crashing down.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3cnFViTQZIQ
By the way, the other cat is named Light. So together, they're Light and Dark.
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« Reply #10 on: 2017-12-28 08:46:42 »

Great job on this fun comic thanks for sharing. :D
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