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« on: 2018-06-03 12:27:48 »
Just minding her own business, a sudden urge sneaks it's way into Starlight Glimmer's nose!  She fights hard but will she be able to fend back a monstrous sneeze? 

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« Reply #1 on: 2018-06-03 12:47:00 »
OH WOW!  WOW! That is a wonderful comic!  I love the build up and how she really fights that sneezes until, BOOOM!! Great comic and nice job, APD!
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« Reply #2 on: 2018-06-03 13:01:51 »
This comic may be more fitting for other people but I think you did very nice with your idea =) Out of all the main characters I seriously think Starlight would be the one to struggle the most with her sneezes XD

*spoilers. No she does not succeed in holding it back*
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« Reply #3 on: 2018-06-03 13:06:50 »
Hell yeah, more Glimmy sneezing. Cute build up. I dunno if I ever mentioned this, which is weird if I didn't, but I love the way you draw sneezing cheeks and mouths. How the little nose perks up a bit and the cheeks kinda push up to the mouth, with the mouth parted that way. Real cute. Love the spray.
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« Reply #4 on: 2018-06-03 13:43:57 »
Oh my....oh my......wow. Just freaking wow! She is so expressive in her nose and the rest of her face. She's tryin to fight it but a sneeze wins most of the time and you captured that perfectly! Good on ya!
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« Reply #5 on: 2018-06-03 13:50:03 »
Really spot on, APD.  I never mentioned it either but your newer way of drawing sneezes with the cheeks is a very nice addition and new way to draw a sneeze expression. You and Silver do this well. :)  Really nice colors and a good build up with a strong sneeze. :)
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« Reply #6 on: 2018-06-03 14:36:03 »
Oh wow. :-0

I love it. The expressions are A+. ;D
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« Reply #7 on: 2018-06-03 15:36:24 »
Wow, I like this!  I really like comics so this makes me pretty happy to see a full on comic involving a sneeze and nicely colored.  Swell job, APD.
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« Reply #8 on: 2018-06-06 15:05:53 »
This turned out really good, APD. :D  Nice job.  Good progression showing us how the sneeze built up with the expression visuals.  Nice one.
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« Reply #9 on: 2018-06-07 13:19:07 »
Really good coming. Nice solid visuals and lots of nice spray.
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« Reply #10 on: 2018-06-07 15:55:16 »
Wow!  This is a great comic, APD.  I love the build up and the colors are really nice. :)  Color seems to make things so much happier at times.  I like how she looks so bored in the beginning, lol!  Good thing that sneeze broke things up for her.
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« Reply #11 on: 2018-06-08 14:06:38 »
This is a great comic!  Really nice build up with a good strong sneeze!  Nice!
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« Reply #12 on: 2018-06-10 16:12:31 »
Wonderful sneeze comic here, APD.  I like her build up and the actually sneeze release is really intense too.  Lots of fine details with the spray which is superb on your part.  Very nice!
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« Reply #13 on: 2018-06-13 18:58:23 »
This is a lovely comic.  I like how you showed us her sneeze building up!  I love comics that show the full process of a sneeze.
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« Reply #14 on: 2018-06-14 21:16:15 »
You did a nice job, APD.  I think the strengths here are the expressions leading into that pinnacle moment, her tipping point, then BOOM!  Explosive mess.  All very well done.  I am glad that mess technique worked out for you.  You did a very fine job on it!
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