Only Equestrian bureaucracy would give a Pony with wings an official, likely taxpayer-funded car.

Twilight saying "dude" is weird to me. Maybe she's been hanging around Spike too long? It's like hearing your mom try to be hip and say things like "for shizzle" and "on fleek".
Also, is it properly rendered "nerve-racking", or "nerve-
wracking"? I'm never sure.