Ghost Trick: Phantom Detective - Lynne (F)

[Ynona]

What here too?
Yes, because I felt so nostalgic watching the fandubs that I wanted to make fan art of the game!
It just happened to turn into a sneeze art...

Anyways, this one was interesting for me.
You see, I'm working on a comic in my spare time.
A long time ago when I was making my first steps as an self-proclaimed artist I was reeeeeeally rigid and stiff with my drawings.
My characters barely moved and they where always making the same pose with some slight changes here and there.
So to make my art style more expressive I've decided to draw a comic that focuses a lot on physical and slapstick humor.
While I'm still working on making my drawings more dynamic, the comic definitely helped me!
But you know, sometimes I just don't want draw extreme crazyness all the time, sometimes I just want to make something a bit more serious.
And so, this happened:



Hope you like this!

[Miggs]

Dude I love your freakin' style man. It's very stylized but incredibly appealing to the eye! The monochrome work is real great too! Very cute simple sneezes are real nice to see, and so far from what I've seen you've pulled 'em off real nicely!

[Silverwing]

It's a good day when drawing turns into a sneeze drawing!  Really nicely done!  Very stylized and it looks great!

[FoxTail]

I think it is great you are sharing with us.  It's great you are trying to make your characters show more expression and movement.  You definitely don't want to be Family Guy rigid and stiff.   This comic looks really good and seemed to flow well. She's a cute character design too.

[Kiwi]

Simple and cute sneeze.  But the comic itself is nice.  You play with some perspective a bit with the camera moving in then moving back out at the end.  It's good, nice work!

[Miggs]

You definitely don't want to be Family Guy rigid and stiff.

^^^^^^^^ This
And so far from what you've shown, you're far from that, so :ok_hand:

[Wolfwood]

Flip ya!  That looks great, Ynona.

[mysteryserpent]

Thank you for taking time showing your idea here in this small place. This forum may be small, but it is really a nice place. =)

You did a great job with your comic! The way this color scheme looks, it reminds me of how Spider Man Noir was drawn in the recent Spiderverse movie. That is great to me! It isn't something that is often used.

Using only monocrome shades, you put details in this comic that most fully colored comics do not have. I love seeing the small little details like the tiny shiver lines you added after the sneeze, and the pose itself you drew for her is a cute pose with how her legs are drawn.

The lines and tones of shading you did for her outfit are very well done! Back when I first played the game I thought she had a cute design, and I think you did great drawing her in this comic! ^^

Her hairstyle is unique, and I like the way you drew it throughout the comic as when the sneeze itself happened the position her hair was drawn in naturally shifted when her head moved. That is neat to see! =)

The pre-sneeze panels both have a great face expression! The simple extra shade of color is a nice detail. I really like the way you spelled out her sneeze too!

[Ynona]

Thank you everybody, I'm glad you enjoyed this!!^^

I love seeing the small little details like the tiny shiver lines you added after the sneeze, and the pose itself you drew for her is a cute pose with how her legs are drawn.

I struggled so hard for the pose in the first pannel
I literally traced the picture I was using as a model for the legs, in fact I feel like they ended up chubbier than what I've meant them to be... ahahaha!

[Rainberry]

This is really good.  I think you did a nice job!

[RainySunshine]

Very nice work on this comic.  Having an already sharp style of art, it can be difficult to avoid the stiff look, but I feel you accomplished it pretty well here.

Full size: https://i.imgur.com/sn1V9EH.jpg

[Miggs]

He linked the full size in the original post, ya goof. Jus' gotta open the pic in another tab

[TheBeesSneeze]

This is a cute comic!  I like how you not only made the character, but I like the monochrome look and setting it takes place in.

Full size: https://i.imgur.com/sn1V9EH.jpg

Thanks, I wasn't aware of how to make it larger!

[Darrin]

Nice work on the comic.