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« on: 2019-06-03 21:20:42 »

This story is based on the very first time I ever noticed sneezing. I was in the fourth grade and had just gotten home from school and was up stairs watching cartoons while doing my homework
when I saw Scooby Doo sneeze for the first time. This story is loosely based on the cartoon I saw. It's in multi media form so please enjoy all of the parts to the presentation. I developed this story six years ago when I was a senior in high school.

To remain still and perfectly quite was a must. Any sudden nosey would surely attract attention to them, and this was something they couldn’t afford. Daphne and Scooby Doo stood absolutely still hiding among the other statues inside the display. The ghost pirate had entered the room and was franticly searching for them. It started off simple, a gentle brush from Daphne’s soft red hair against the underside of Scooby’s large black nose. Her hair had a sweet seductive smell to it, probably from her choice of shampoos Scooby Doo thought as he enjoyed her sent. But it was then that he made a tragic mistake he underestimated the power of his nose and inhaled a long lock of Daphne’s hair up inside his large right nostril. His eyes grew wide as he could feel her hair begging to tickle around the inside of his nose. Her silken hair gently tickled against the soft inner side walls of his nasal cavity bushing against the small hairs that lined it’s surface. Scooby Doo could feel a uncomfortable feeling begging to grow inside his nose. A tingly burning sensation, a feeling he knew all to well. A sneeze. He thought to himself “ro no rot a reeze” he felt his eyes filling with tears as his nose grew runny. He fought the growing sneeze as if there very lives depended on it, and they did all it would take was just one of his giant sneezes to give them away. AAAHHH, AAAHHHHH the sneeze began to build Daphne leaned back and whispered to Scooby “Scooby Doo what are you doing please keep quite he will hear you but as she leaned back it only caused her hair to slip deeper into his nose. EEEYYY, AAAHHHH Daphne turned and saw the sneezy expression written all over Scooby’s face. “Oh now” she exclaimed “not now” as she quickly pulled her hair out of his nose and place her finger against the underside sliding back and forth desperately trying to fend off his sneeze. But when she pulled her hair back out of his nose the locks dragged along the side of his nostril giving it a final, dreadful tickle. All of Daphne’s nose itching could do nothing to suppress the powerful sneezing that was just waiting to explode out. AUGH, EEAAAYY, AAAHHH, Daphne looked over and could see the pirates ghost bearing down on them. AAAAHHHH, AAAAAHHHHH, there was no use in fighting anymore the sneeze had won and it was time for it to come out. YYYYEEEE, YYYYAAAA, RRRAAACHOOOWWWW!!!!.. (PLAY WAV HERE!)
The powerful sneeze covered Daphne and blew the mask off the pirates ghost. It’s old man Smithers Daphne exclaimed. Add I would have gotten away with it to if it wasn’t for you meddling kids and your sneezy dog
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« Reply #1 on: 2019-06-03 23:36:09 »

Oh wow!  Blast from the past!!!! I so remember these!!! :D  What a lovely piece of art and the story, ha ha!! I love it!  When were these?  Like back in the early 2000s? 
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« Reply #2 on: 2019-06-03 23:39:06 »

A two-fer!  This is really a nostalgic thing for me.  I remember finding them on some website (SF community) and I loved this stuff as a kid...teenager...whatever I was.  I remember these dearly and I bet that comic is saved on some old file somewhere!  Welcome to the community, Daphine!  You are a legend here amongst many.  I didn't know you had returned to the SF community!  Let me be one of the first to welcome you.
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« Reply #3 on: 2019-06-03 23:41:26 »

This is aging us long time sneeze community members.  What a surprise to see you back and sharing your work with us! I never thought I would get to speak directly with Daphine themselves!  Welcome to PSF!  I don't remember where it was, but there was a conversation about your art around here somewhere recently.
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« Reply #4 on: 2019-06-04 21:13:33 »

Oh wow!  Blast from the past!!!! I so remember these!!! :D  What a lovely piece of art and the story, ha ha!! I love it!  When were these?  Like back in the early 2000s?
Thank you Soda, it is so nice to meet you be here  :)  I love that you remember this story!  This was the very first story I ever posted on a forum (not the first Scooby Doo fanfic I ever wrote, just the first I ever had the nerve to show anyone  ;D)  I believe I wrote this story and drew the comic to go with it back in 1998, YIKES!  Another piece of trivia.  Back when I used to post this story I called it a multimedia fanfic because I had a wav of Scooby sneezing that you could play right at the appropriate time.  I was such a dork LOL  :-[.

A two-fer!  This is really a nostalgic thing for me.  I remember finding them on some website (SF community) and I loved this stuff as a kid...teenager...whatever I was.  I remember these dearly and I bet that comic is saved on some old file somewhere!  Welcome to the community, Daphine!  You are a legend here amongst many.  I didn't know you had returned to the SF community!  Let me be one of the first to welcome you.

Thank you Darrin!  It's so nice to meet you  :)  I while back I was thinking about wether anybody ever saved any of my sneezy Scooby drawings  :-[.  Thank you also for calling me a legend  :-[, I wish that was true but I always  thought the legends of this community were Bondi, Tarot Girl and others like them.  If they had not first had the courage to start websites like they did none of this might have ever had happened.  It's funny but recently a few people mentioned how I had returned to the community or were have I been.  To be honest I never really left.  My life got a little busy and because of that I kind of lost interest (a little LOL).  Funny thing during that time I lost both of my passwords to the forum and my own YouTube page.  My email address Daphine@buffalo.com also got shut down so I couldn't find a way to contact any mods or anyone from YouTube to help me LOL.  Anyway I was still on The Furry Sneezing Archive from time to time.  Sorry, that was a long explanation  :-0

This is aging us long time sneeze community members.  What a surprise to see you back and sharing your work with us! I never thought I would get to speak directly with Daphine themselves!  Welcome to PSF!  I don't remember where it was, but there was a conversation about your art around here somewhere recently.


Hi Rainy Sunshine, it's so nice to meet you.  Your so right!  As I reply to these wonderful messages from all of you I'm realizing how long we have all been around here  :-0.  It is so nice what you said (what you all have said).  Your making me feel like some kind of celebrity :-[.  I really don't think I am but thank you.  I really want to say thank you to you and everyone.  I'm sure like other members I grew up thinking that there was something wrong with me  :'(.  When my friends would be talking about a cute boy I would be fantasizing about a certain cartoon canine having to sneeze while we would be hiding together  ::).  To this day I still have never told anyone about my interests.  It is so nice to know that there is a place were I have always been excepted  ;D
Smile2use on Furry sneeze told me about this forum, I don't know how I never knew about it.  Anyway he also told me about a thread that was on here were members where discussing my drawings and fanfics I wrote.  I must admit I am curious about it.  I would love to know how well my work has held up over the years especially with how people are doing these wonderful comics on computers when mine were just drawn with a pencil LOL.  If you know how I can find it I would love to know.

Lastly I have just started drawing again.  I kept all of my old work that I started doing back in junior high and have been trying to create something new. 
Thank you all for such a warm welcome  ;D



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« Reply #5 on: 2019-06-04 23:17:15 »

Nostalgia.  I remember this stuff back on the early days of  sneeze fetish interwebs.  There were very few places to get content and the places that had content were minor.  This was like huge to me when I saw these and read some of your stories including Sonya. 
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« Reply #6 on: 2019-06-05 13:03:32 »

Nostalgia.  I remember this stuff back on the early days of  sneeze fetish interwebs.  There were very few places to get content and the places that had content were minor.  This was like huge to me when I saw these and read some of your stories including Sonya.

Funny that you should mention Sonya.  As I might have mentioned earlier, I was going through all of my old Scooby stuff and other drawings and I came a cross my Sonya sketches and stories.  What was stranger was I found a 4th Sonya comic which I had never gotten around to writing a story to go with it.  Maybe as a gift to my new friends here on PSF I should write one!
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« Reply #7 on: 2019-06-05 16:01:47 »

Nostalgia.  I remember this stuff back on the early days of  sneeze fetish interwebs.  There were very few places to get content and the places that had content were minor.  This was like huge to me when I saw these and read some of your stories including Sonya.

Funny that you should mention Sonya.  As I might have mentioned earlier, I was going through all of my old Scooby stuff and other drawings and I came a cross my Sonya sketches and stories.  What was stranger was I found a 4th Sonya comic which I had never gotten around to writing a story to go with it.  Maybe as a gift to my new friends here on PSF I should write one!

Did you ever release the art for the 4th Sonya story?  I remember Detective Sonya but I don't remember much else.  I might have to re-read them. :D
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« Reply #8 on: 2019-06-05 16:03:45 »

For a fourth grader this ain't bad at all. ;)  Also good drawings.  I must say I am curious about the (Play WAV) thing.  Was there originally a sound clip that was played?
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« Reply #9 on: 2019-06-05 18:18:06 »

Thank you for sharing these! :D  It's been a long time since I've seen the Scooby drawings.  Crazy these are from the 90s now! 
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« Reply #10 on: 2019-06-05 21:39:55 »

For a fourth grader this ain't bad at all. ;)  Also good drawings.  I must say I am curious about the (Play WAV) thing.  Was there originally a sound clip that was played?

Hi Rainberry.  I'm not going to call you Rain until you tell me to LOL :)).  I'll have to go back and reread what I wrote.  It was late my last two nights I was on here so I may have misspoken  :-[.  I wrote this story when I was in high school, I think it was senior year.  Of course now I'm worried that your going to say "in that case the spelling is horrible LOL :)) ).  The first Scooby Doo fanfic I wrote I still consider to be my best I ever written.  Well Scooby Doo based story that is.  It was based off a dream I had.  It was probably the most vivid dream I ever had even though I was in a cartoon world.  K :-[ind of like the movie Cool World.  Sorry I got on a rant.  To answer your question there was a sound clip the reader could play if they wanted to hear Scooby sneeze.  I could this story a Scooby Doo Multimedia fanfic!  Since they could read the story while looking at the comic and playing the sound wav when instructed to.  What can I say, I had way to much time on my hands back then LOL :-[
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« Reply #11 on: 2019-06-05 21:56:13 »

Thank you for sharing these! :D  It's been a long time since I've seen the Scooby drawings.  Crazy these are from the 90s now!

Hi Silverwing, I was thinking the exact same thing!  That drawing and fanfic could probably buy beer now LOL :))  I mentioned earlier that I was going through my box that I have kept all of my drawings in since the beginning and I have artwork in there that is over 27 years old :-0.  It's to see how much my work changed over the years.  The sad thing is as far as artwork go's I kind of peaked out 15 years ago :-[ that's why I would love to learn how to do computer animation.
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« Reply #12 on: 2019-06-06 12:12:46 »

 
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Funny that you should mention Sonya.  As I might have mentioned earlier, I was going through all of my old Scooby stuff and other drawings and I came a cross my Sonya sketches and stories.  What was stranger was I found a 4th Sonya comic which I had never gotten around to writing a story to go with it.  Maybe as a gift to my new friends here on PSF I should write one!
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Did you ever release the art for the 4th Sonya story?  I remember Detective Sonya but I don't remember much else.  I might have to re-read them. :D
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Hi Soda, I'm sorry I missed this question of yours regarding Sonya.  I don't believe I ever posted this last Agent Sonya comic.  I always combined these comics with stories about Sonya's missions or adventures together.  I did start writing the 4th and what I considered the final installment of the Agent Sonya saga back around 2005.  I just found what I had written so far but I think I'm going to scrap it.  I really didn't like the way it was coming together but also my new DELL laptop doesn't have the early 2000's Word pad program I was writing it on LOL :))
I don't know were you would be able to find any of my old Agent Sonya stories, they might be floating around the web some were.  Some go's for the comics that went with the stories.  They might be around some where.
Here is some Agent Sonya trivia for you.  Sonya first appeared in my very first Scooby Doo fanfic "Scooby Doo for Love of Country".  She wasn't an agent yet.  A couple of years later I found Secret Agent Sonya on another fetish site.  A tickling fetish site.  Anyway I contacted the writer and gave him a copy of my fanfic asking him if it would be OK for me to write a different verstion of her "Agent Sonya".  Take away the Secret LOL. I really expected him to not only say no but also to say that I was a freak.  Happily he said it was OK.  I remember he also told me my Scooby Doo fanfic was interesting  :-0 .  That was good enough for me  :-[
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« Reply #13 on: 2019-06-06 14:39:23 »

I don't know were you would be able to find any of my old Agent Sonya stories, they might be floating around the web some were. 

I think for the most part they were on websites that are no longer with us. 
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« Reply #14 on: 2019-06-06 22:35:02 »

I don't know were you would be able to find any of my old Agent Sonya stories, they might be floating around the web some were. 

I think for the most part they were on websites that are no longer with us.

That is exactly what I feared.  I still have hard copy's of the comics but the stories I wrote, I have them on CD rom on an old word pad program so good luck to me trying to figure out how to get them LOL.
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