Persona 5 - Artistic Interpretation (F) | (New part added!)

[Ynona]

Sorry, this time I around I'll just post the sketch... But to compensate I cleaned up the sketch much more than usual.
I hope that this is not a problem for y'all.

This is a comic all about the Persona 5 main girls.

Quick recap of the game for those who didn't played it:

In Persona 5 the protagonists have the power to enter the mind of people and manipulate them by interacting with stuff inside their head, like stealing their desires to make them feel regret for their actions.
They formed a group of vigilantes/super heroes named "The Phantom Thieves of Hearts" so they can make bad people that are too powerful for the law pay for their crimes.

It's MUCH more complicated than this, but to properly explain the story would take too much time.

Full size here: https://i.imgur.com/Of70keU.jpg



So... Everyone is making animations now, right?
I guess I'll have to join the party on of these days... ;3

[MasterXtreme]

Because I'm a nerd, I laughed way too long at the first two panels.   Really nice drawn comic and I am sure when the sneeze fetishists see this, they will like this a lot.  Three sneezes in one comic!

[Miggs]

"Futaba sneezes like an idiot"
lmao, that's great

The comic as a whole is great. The way you do these comics by mixing in an actual little conversation, but throwing in some sneezes and stuff in there is pretty great.

And cuz I'm biased:
I liked these panels the most c:

[RainySunshine]

"Fatuba sneezes like an idiot."

That is the ultimate line in this whole comic!  I love it all though!  What an awesome comic from a handful of sneezy girls!  What's not to love?

[Darrin]

*Claps strong hard claps.*

This is . . . perfect!  *Wipes away a tear.*

The humor is great on this too. All hits.

[Ynona]

Thank you everybody for your nice comments!

Because I'm a nerd, I laughed way too long at the first two panels.

The comic as a whole is great. The way you do these comics by mixing in an actual little conversation, but throwing in some sneezes and stuff in there is pretty great.

The truth is that I actually want to make fanfics rather than simple fanarts, however I suck at writing... So I mix writing with my drawing skills to compensate.

[Anyponedrawn]

So cute and funny!   I like the "Real" conversation in these.  It pulls back the comedy and sort of makes things more subtle and real... if that makes sense.  I like it.  All the sneezes were great though! 

[Soda]

This comic is beautiful as FUK! (I mean that lovingly) It speaks to me so well!  I can do all those sneezes in one day!   LOL!  I loved the humor is this because it was so spot on and funny! 

[LovesSneezingApparently]

Honestly, this is one of the best ideas for a sneeze comic I’ve seen. 

[Ynona]

So cute and funny!   I like the "Real" conversation in these.  It pulls back the comedy and sort of makes things more subtle and real... if that makes sense.  I like it.  All the sneezes were great though!

Yes, it makes sense! I'm glad you like it! ^_^

This comic is beautiful as FUK! (I mean that lovingly) It speaks to me so well!  I can do all those sneezes in one day!   LOL!  I loved the humor is this because it was so spot on and funny! 

Wow, you must be incredibly sneezy!!
...Unlike me that I can spend entire months without sneezing even once! Ahaha!

Honestly, this is one of the best ideas for a sneeze comic I’ve seen. 

Thank you so much, LSA!^^

[Silverwing]

This is super good!   I love how it goes straight to their sneezes and shows them.  Fun idea for a comic too!

[Anyponedrawn]

I'm glad it makes sense.  I'm sometimes not great with language words tomato encased 4 banger hybrid low pressure system Cordoba. 

[Ynona]

I'm glad it makes sense.  I'm sometimes not great with language words tomato encased 4 banger hybrid low pressure system Cordoba.

You know who are you nipple saladin' to?
Trust me, I have problems finding the right woomies too!!

I just take my frag time to write my words good! XD
...and I often fail anyways.

[FoxTail]

This is such a cute comic.  I like their conversation and how you present to us their sneezes.

[Kiwi]

Really great comic.  It's endearing.   I love the conversation going on here because it's silly but there is truth in what she is pointing out.