....*faints* This is beautiful. I could just say that and be done with my comment XD but seriously, the concept alone in this drawing is completely beautiful to me. A sneeze literally directly causing a different sneeze to happen. Having size difference also be a part of this concept? I love this drawing. A lot! =)
The shape of the dragon's nostril is nicely drawn! It is a large, sensitive nostril that must feel what is happening inside it. However, the mermaid herself has a nice looking flaring nostril too during the close up of her pre-sneeze hitching panel. I love seeing both nostrils of the noses feel sneezy before the sneezes happened.
The text is a big reason why I enjoy your drawing here so much. The larger letters of the dragon's text FEEL urgent, like a growing, desperate rumble that gets more frequent the longer the mermaid is inside the nostril.
The second panel having both of their pre-sneeze hitching texts appear at the same time shows the difference between the sound of two sneezes. I like the spelling you gave them both
Your mermaid character here. She looks really sweet! ^^ I like her design a lot with how you drew her details along her face, head fin, and hair. The panel where she first sneezes and when she got sneezed out are cute to me because I see how you drew her tail fin.
The FORCE of the dragon's sneeze looks very powerful, but it was the force and wetness of the mermaid's own sneezes that could have teased the nostril of the dragon to cause the dragon to sneeze in the first place...it's an awesome concept all around!
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