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Daphine
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« on: 2020-01-03 22:04:20 »

Since I have been home at my parents house for the holidays and sleeping in my old room I got the urge to draw a new comic. On New Year’s eve I crawled back into my old secret drawing place in the back of the attic with a glass of red wine. I first started drawing back there when I was in middle school, I didn’t add the red wine until late high school years LOL. This really brought back some great memories.
Enjoy the new comic and the short sneezing while hiding story that goes along with it.

Happy new year everyone!

Daphine

Scooby is hiding in the shadows just waiting for his chance to escape. Suddenly he hears the sounds of stiletto heels heading his way. He had heard this sound before and he knew who the sound belong to, Sonya! Desperate to stay hidden he moves back into the shadows just in time to see her magnificent form appear right before him. Sonya had her back to Scooby as she took out her walkie-talkie. This is agent Sonya over. I have looked all over the first level of the complex and have seen no sign of any intruder over. I am awaiting further orders over. A crackling British voice came over the walkie-talkie. Hold your position while we check in with the other agents, over.
Sonya replied Roger, over and out and returned her walkie-talkie to her pack. She leaned back and rested her back against the wall behind her. The very wall that Scooby was hiding behind. The large great dane just sat there frozen in fear. All she had to do was turn around and walk around the corner and she would find him.
As Scooby sat there he started to hear a faint buzzing sound.  The buzzing began to grow louder. Scooby began to hear it more in is left ear than his right. Suddenly he felt a tingling in his ear as a tiny fly began to fly inside of it. It tickled his ear and he quickly flipped his head causing the fly to takeoff but it also caused his collar to rattle a little. Scooby Doo immediately froze has he heard Sonya start to walk around. She called out "is anyone there?" And then stood quiet listening for a reply.
 As they both stood there motionless Scooby suddenly began to hear the buzzing return. This time he watched the tiny fly flying around right in front of his face. The fly did a couple loop dee loop‘s before hovering right in front of Scooby‘s eyes. It appeared to be facing Scooby and for a moment he believed the tiny fly was looking right into his eyes. The fly finally came to a landing on the bridge of Scooby‘s nose. Scooby just looked cross eyed at the Fly as he watched it begin to walk down his nose heading away from his eyes. The fly finally stopped when it reached the top of Scooby‘s nose. then turned around and looked back right into the large dogs eyes. As tiny as the fly was Scooby could make out a menacing expression on it's face. Scooby just looked back at the fly and gently shook his head as if to say “ please don’t!” The tiny fly then disappeared from Scooby‘s view as he could feel it walk down the front of his large black nose. Scooby then felt a slight tickle as the fly was right at the brink of one of his large nostrils. A wave of fear crashed over Scooby as he felt the fly crawl into his nose. As the tiny fly made its way deeper into Scooby’s left nostril it would occasionally flap its wings but it would do it so quickly that it made the whole inside of Scooby’s nose vibrate. The tickle was so intense that it caused Scooby‘s eyes to begin to tear up. His nostrils flared and soon his nose began to run.  It tickled so bad that Scooby began to feel as though he was going to sneeze, he thought to himself “A sneeze, no not a sneeze not now it will give me away. He bit down hard and squeezed his eyes shut. He felt sneezy tears run down his cheeks. Scooby could feel his nose running as mucus oozed from his nostrils. Scooby sniffed causing a slight gurgling sound in his nostrils this caused the fly to take flight inside his nose. The flies wings tickled at the soft pink walls of Scooby‘s nostril causing his need to sneeze to become unbearable . Scooby felt his lower jaw go slack as his chest began to expand as his building sneeze became audible, raa, raa, raaa! Scooby quickly stuck his plump index finger under his large nose just in time to fend off his growing sneeze. He Let out a sigh of relief when he suddenly heard Sonya’s voice from the other side of the wall “ It sounds like someone has to sneeze“. Right then the fly noticed that it’s exit was cut off and it began to panic. It began to flap its wings wildly causing the intense tickle deep inside Scooby‘s nose to grow worse. His eyes bulged from his head as tears stream down his face. his nostrils flared wildly as a powerful sneeze built. Scooby could feel his finger began to slip away from under his nose. His poor nose could take no more.  It started slowly but built up fast “ raa, raaa, yee, yaaaa right then Sonya walked around the wall only to catch Scooby in the act of a most powerful sneeze


The fly shoot from Scooby's nose like a bullet as it impacted into Sonya's cheek.  It slipped off of her face and landed in a puddle on Sonya's cleavage.  Sonya slowly opened her eye's as she wiped the spray off of her face.  She looked at the large great dane as he sat there with a goofy post sneeze expression written all over his face.  "Gazuntite Scooby Doo, do you supply towels with your showers  :))
« Last Edit: 2021-06-03 21:59:31 by Daphine » Logged
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« Reply #1 on: 2020-01-03 23:42:40 »

So messy but SOOOOO much detail in the story and the drawing!  Fabulous!
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« Reply #2 on: 2020-01-04 13:32:20 »

Thank you for sharing.  I like the new drawings!
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« Reply #3 on: 2020-01-04 14:09:05 »

So messy.  Sonya likes being sneezed on.... secretly. ;)
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« Reply #4 on: 2020-01-04 15:33:25 »

Thank you for the wonderful reply's, I'm glad you seam to enjoy it. 

After rereading the story this afternoon I decided that I wasn't really happy with the ending.  What happened to the fly!!!!!! I decided to add a little more to the end of the story ;D
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« Reply #5 on: 2020-01-05 21:40:08 »

This is great. 😊
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« Reply #6 on: 2020-01-05 22:06:39 »

Nice work, Daphine!  Have you seen Velma sneeze? You might be interested, worth a look and comment to the artist. :)
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« Reply #7 on: 2020-01-06 20:41:42 »

Very nice again. :)  I like how you are slowly getting back into drawing!  How does it feel to draw again? :D
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« Reply #8 on: 2020-01-07 20:27:45 »

This is great. 😊
Thank you Sunnygirl, I'm glad you liked it ;D

Nice work, Daphine!  Have you seen Velma sneeze? You might be interested, worth a look and comment to the artist. :)
I have seen this wonderful picture before, great job MasterXtreme :).  I would have commented on DA if I could still get on my account :)).  It's just like the Blue Forum, I'm locked out of every place these days LOL.

Very nice again. :)  I like how you are slowly getting back into drawing!  How does it feel to draw again? :D
Thank you Grapefoot.  I have to admit I don't get as excited about drawing as I used to.  At times I feel like I have drawn every possible situation to make  Scooby Doo to sneeze.  Does anyone have any new idea's?  I also have become a little bored with my old style of pencil and paper drawing.  Does anyone know any easy to learn computer art programs?



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« Reply #9 on: 2020-01-07 21:23:41 »

Hehehe!  Nice new comic!  It's nice to see you draw again.  There are so many possibilities still. Nose through a hole?  Sniffing to try and find a scent?  Just him having a cold.  Maybe trying to stop a sneeze by putting something in his nostrils.
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« Reply #10 on: 2020-01-08 21:15:58 »

Hehehe!  Nice new comic!  It's nice to see you draw again.  There are so many possibilities still. Nose through a hole?  Sniffing to try and find a scent?  Just him having a cold.  Maybe trying to stop a sneeze by putting something in his nostrils.

Hi Smiles2us, I'm glad you liked the comic and the story and thank you for the idea's ;D.  I really liked the first suggestion, nose through a hole ^-^.  I have thought of idea's like that but never really did anything with it.  I have had an idea like that, that I have been batting around for a few years.  It go's like this.  Scooby and the gang has been captured by Sonya.  They were trying to find some kind of old document that she has and they need to get back from her undamaged.  Anyway, Sonya comes up with a great idea how she can destroy the document.  First she puts Scooby in the cone of shame, if you saw the movie "Up" you will know what I mean LOL.  She then takes pleasure tickle torturing Scooby's nose while holding the document right infront of his face while the gang is forced to watch in horror.  See the cone will act as a cannon so when (or if) Scooby sneezes all the force will be propelled forward!

I also really liked your last idea but I'm not sure I fully understand it. Scooby is trying to stop a sneeze by putting something in his nostrils.  Could you flush this idea out a little more.  Maybe give me a little more detail, why does he have to sneeze and what would you have him put up his nostrils to stop it ;D?
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« Reply #11 on: 2020-01-09 20:18:32 »

You pic of the dog wearing a cone made me think of a comic of a dog wearing a cone that can't stop sneezing... Interesting idea.
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« Reply #12 on: 2020-01-12 21:02:16 »

You pic of the dog wearing a cone made me think of a comic of a dog wearing a cone that can't stop sneezing... Interesting idea.

The more I think about this idea the more I like it.  I have already started to work on a short comic.  I can't wait to show it off ;D.
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« Reply #13 on: 2020-01-12 21:46:10 »

Good luck.
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