New chars (no sneezing tho) (M)

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https://x-0u0-x.tumblr.com/post/615341257174237184/new-characters-emma-and-robbie-honest-to-god

These are supposed to be the secondary characters for the plot that I’m making up in my head, but since finishing this drawing, I’m not sure that they can work anymore. With the way I imagine it, the common cold’s supposed to just be this person/entity that wanders around and goes from place to place in order to spread the cold. He’s like a hitchhiker, except he’s also a germ. If there are secondary characters that would tie him down to one area, then the concept kinda doesn’t work anymore. What do you think of these characters? Should I keep them or no?

Also, this is a continuation of my last post: https://x-0u0-x.tumblr.com/post/615216243053674496/more-common-cold-enjoy-if-anyones-even-out

[flemishcap]

Hehehe.  I like your cartoony style.  Emma and that dude that pulls her back is cute! I say keep em'.   But do as you please.

[timmelon]

I just love the first frame .

[Soda]

I like those new characters and how they look! So cute.

[RainySunshine]

It is all up to you, but you often need a few characters for people to latch on to when reading a story/comic.  Having someone to counter balance the common cold is good.  I like their designs.

[Grapefoot]

Really it is up to you.  The character expressions especially on panel three is good!

[Ynona]

Clean and nice art style! Great job!!

[Bumble]

I like the designs of the two new characters.