Adorkable Twilight & Friends Sneeze Edits (F)

[1234]

So... to put it in a certain way, I've read the things members say here about some of the sneezes from AT&F, and I will say, I agree with a lot of them.
SO... I made edits to a couple of AT&F sneeze comics.

Keep in mind I intend no disrespect towards the comic's creators. I'm not gonna tell them how to draw sneezes the way we want it. As we know, they're not making these comics with us in mind (most of the time). These are mainly experiments. Experiments in seeing how well I could do.
(I didn't want to make a new topic for these, but I figured I'd be told I should have, so I went ahead and did it.)

PLEASE, DO NOT REPOST THESE ANYWHERE

Edit 1. Based on the comic "Unlucky Parents".
At least one member here wondered why Twilight's snot was colored blue. I changed it to a more typical color. Pretty easy. I guess it makes the snot a bit harder to see.
Plus a bonus. Edited from the comic "Perfect Timing".
What did that sneeze look like?... One guess.
(I'm mainly screwing around with this one. XD)

Edit 2. Based on the comic "Just Focus".
This one was tougher. I admit I was disappointed, like many, by Vinyl not sneezing even though she was REALLY about to do it. So I tweaked a bit of dialogue near the end, put in and edited the first panel from the comic "Manners" to have her sneeze. It's not new, but it does the job.

Edit 3. Based on the comic "Breakfast With Spike".
We were similarly disappointed when Rainbow Dash didn't sneeze here. So I gave her one. Spike's breakfast is now slightly more unsafe to eat, let alone get his face shoved in.

That's pretty much it. Not sure whether or not I'll do more. Either way, hope you like these.

[timmelon]

Hmm... I think there will be a good decision to remove the titles from these edits to prevent someone from posting them as originals .
As for «Just Focus» edit, the new outcome must be true — her expanded chest says that the reflex sequence has been started.

[Silverwing]

These are great, Numbers.  I didn't even know you were still around since I never see you.  Lol!  So this makes me very happy. 

If you do more, I could totally be a part of that and support ya!  But i understand if you don't as well.  I know editing other's art can be seen as taboo.

"Just Focus" for me was a big one.  Vinyl was right on the cusp and the fact she didn't sneeze was a huge let down.  She had some good control there... something she doesn't often have.

As to why Twilight's snot was blue in that other one, I have NO idea on that, lol.

[1234]

I'm glad you two like them.

Hmm... I think there will be a good decision to remove the titles from these edits to prevent someone from posting them as originals .

Oh shoot, good idea! I didn't think of that. I'll be doing that this evening.

If you do more, I could totally be a part of that and support ya!  But i understand if you don't as well.  I know editing other's art can be seen as taboo.
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As to why Twilight's snot was blue in that other one, I have NO idea on that, lol.

Yeah, I still can't help but feel like a butthole whenever I do that. I feel like I'm taking away from the originals. But I've been told before that I worried for nothing, so I figured, people don't have a big problem with it.

As for the blue snot, it guess it looked better. If a wet substance were to seep through a car seat in a comic like this, I guess I'd make it look blue? (Which is why I kept it blue in the fourth panel.) And then they probably colored it blue in the fifth panel for consistency.

[Smiles2us]

Oh wow.  Yeah, I can get on board with this.   The green snot, while something I think people wanted, somehow the blue works?  I don't know why... ?  Lol

I think you did a nice job on these.  I kind of want to see more.  I don't know how many more opportunities there are there.   I always enjoy what you share.

[MasterXtreme]

Good job. Really good job.    I bet I could draw something up to fit the Vinyl one a bit better.  The styling is different from how they used to draw these to today.  I like little creative ideas like this.  Curious is others can come up with more incidents that could be edited like this.

[flemishcap]

Oh wow!!! I didn't expect this but am pretty pleased by seeing it.   Thank you.

[1234]

Thanks for all the feedback, guys. I appreciate it.

Here's edit 3. Based on the comic "Breakfast With Spike".
I can't believe I was forgetting this one. We were similarly disappointed when Rainbow Dash didn't sneeze here. IIRC, one of us had already mentioned the possibility of editing it. (ETA: It was actually Kiwi and I who first brought it up! XD) So I gave her one. Spike's breakfast is now slightly more unsafe to eat, let alone get his face shoved in.

And also, an addendum to the Twilight edit: what went on behind the seat that we didn't see?
Edited from the comic "Perfect Timing"... a great start to things... more or less.

[timmelon]

Here is a little more feedback for you:

PERFECT!

[1234]

Thanks, Tim!

[Silverwing]

Edit three is now my favorite!  Perfecto!

[Grapefoot]

Pretty nice work.  I think that third edit is really good, maybe the best.   I remember when we all wanted these sneezes to happen.   So it's nice you made them happen...sorta...in an alt history.  

Blue snot I think was sort of a reference to the G5 unicorn snot?  Maybe?

[1234]

Thanks, fellas.

Blue snot I think was sort of a reference to the G5 unicorn snot?  Maybe?

Ahh, could be! Didn't think of that.

[Soda]

These are fun and nice edits.   Nicely done.

I honestly thought you weren't part of the forum anymore.  I hadn't seen you in ages.

[RainySunshine]

Nice edits, Numbers.