I'll comment on the other pages individually, but for here I'll just say this: you worked and seemed to have a lot of fun with this comic. I'm happy you were able to talk with them about sneezing, and honestly that person is a friendly and fun person to comment on their work. The designs of their characters are interesting. I may not like that level of cartoony style too much but I still enjoy the characters. With a style and characters like them, anything is possible XD.
Seriously though, I hope you had fun with this comic and I know you are having a LOT going on with your sister

Congratulations to her =)