Smiles2Us (Pony, No Mess, MLP, F)

[Wolfwood]

I can't add anything that hasn't't already been said.  Great job on this great comic!

[Grapefoot]

Really a great comic and I do love seeing Smiles in such a silly situation.  Fantastic build up, it made me chuckle.  I loved the sneezing.

[FoxTail]

Fabulously drawn comic.  Her sneezes are wet and have lovely buildups! I love all the nose teasing and nostril flaring. Lovely comic and drawings.

[mysteryserpent]

@Kmlp

I do not know if you want the comment that is in my head...I want to share my thoughts, but it's...a long long comment XD

In all seriousness, the art you create makes me smile =) thank you. Thank you so much for taking time drawing this.

@mysteryserpent It's okay.  Please share your thoughts .  I don't mind taking the time to read it 

Ok. Sorry for the long delay...this took longer than I care to admit to write, but I loved what you were able to create here =)

Here I go

[mysteryserpent]

Immediately, the thing that stands out to me with what you did was how clear and easy to see the format is. The use of black for borders on the panels helps the individual panels stand out from each other. The backgrounds do not blend all together because of these black lines. I really like that =)

The very first panel is awesome to me. The background surrounds are simple but do great at showing where the situation is happening. I love how this first panel hints at what is going to happen with the flower being nearby. The dialogue is a lot but because of how the first panel is, the details of the character and surroundings are not hidden at all.

I like how her dialogue connects to the second panel. She didn't pause talking at all and it was like lady fate or karma herself heard what was said and set things in motion. Literally.

I love the way you draw eyes. The details of the lines and colors are honestly fascinating to look at. When I see these eyes, my mind goes way back to when I first saw the MLP friendship is magic character designs and how large but fun their eyes were.

The sound effect letters are different than the speaking dialogue letters, and I really like seeing these effect letters =) I LOVE how the flower is not just randomly having a part float in the air for no reason. The flower bending and reacting to the woosh air is great to see.

The panel that I thought the most about in the entire comic, and kept rechecking days after I first saw the panel, is this first page's "brush" panel. I think the way how both eyes focus and look crossed towards her nose, the nose detail itself, seeing the letters next to the nose, and the way how her entire face expression shifted in a little tilting look that makes me think of my pet cat or a dog looking curious at something unexpected. This tilting face expression is very effective at drawing my attention towards what is causing the brush. The loose flower petal. My mind literally HEARS the tiny brushing sound effect noise this petal could be doing XD

The final panel of the first page is also great to me. The scrunch lines along her muzzle amplify how the itch is not just being felt by her nostrils. The nostrils themselves are AWESOME at showing the spike rise in urgency together with the effect lines near her nose. The flower petal did not just brush against one nostril, it brushed against her nose itself and both nostrils are feeling the urge start to form.

This final panel also has sweet extra details of showing how her ears and eyes changed how they looked with this new beginning urge that is clearly felt. Her ears lower while her eyes shrink. She knows that her words are meaningless right now. The urge formed, and now she needs to figure out what to do quickly or else XD

This is the first page. There's a lot more I want to say with the other pages =) If you want me to say more I can. I can stop here if you want me to.

EACH page has charm and I enjoyed seeing what you were able to create with this idea. Smiles is awesome, and it is sweet seeing her character design in a comic

[Roul]

@Wolfwood @Grapefoot @FoxTail Glad you enjoyed this comic   It was so much fun bringing this funny scenario to life 

@mysteryserpent Thank you for your detailed response.  Your attention to detail and observations really mean a lot, and I do appreciate hearing that you got a good laugh or enjoyed the whole idea of Smiles saying something with the forces of nature proving her wrong 🤣 .  Reading your response makes me realize too how engaging it is from another point of view; as an artist, I can never feel the same surprises and fun that an audience would when reading my own comic (though, that is to be expected since I planned, and drew this all out), so I'm really happy to hear that this page alone catches your attention this much lol.

If you'd like to respond to the other pages, please go right ahead; I love your detailed responses 

[Sniffles]

An incredibly detailed and beautiful comic.  I don't know what else to add.  I loved watching her struggle to hold back those sneezes, but it was just too much for her!  Lovely work. 

[flemishcap]

Nice comic! I am really impressed Kmlp!  I read through the whole comic and all the comments.  I really don't have much to add because everyone else said it so well!  I am excited for anything else you come up with!

[Silverwing]

It's super fantastic indeed!  Glad people are still finding this.

[Rainberry]

It's super fantastic indeed!  Glad people are still finding this.

Good art keeps being found!

[Wolfwood]

Reading this again.  It's so cute!  Such a great job on this massive project.

[Tüsszent]

Beautiful work on this comic!  Truly.  I am impressed!

[TheBeesSneeze]

Congrats on this comic still gaining tons of viewers.  Over 200 in a month!  That is awesome!!!

[Rainberry]

I think you are about to be the only artist besides just a few here who have had a single piece of art reach 1,000 views!  You are getting close! @Kmlp

[RainySunshine]

Woot!!! Nice job!! Getting close!!