Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)

[Roul]

Heyo everyone.  Thanks for your viewing, and glad you enjoy the comic  .  Margo sure does have an attitude huh? Looks like her sneezy mascot pride gets to her just a teeny bit 

Tysm for the concern,  best wishes, and the invitation to reach out too whenever I'm in need.  The stuff I've went through was a first for me, so it hits pretty hard.  I am doing a lot better than last year though, so I'm chillin' right now.

[FoxTail]

I can tell just by looking at this that it took a TON of time to create.  It's an evolution of your style and it looks downright pretty in areas.  Fabulous work on all of it and I love the fun story going with this.  It's quite absurd what is actually happening here if you think about it.  Lol! Awesome sneezes and so much variation.  I love the many different angles and poses.  No two panels were the same and each one was hand crafted to be different.  I am super impressed!!

[Sniffles]

Great comic, Kmlp! So much happening in ten pages. Ten pages is a ton considering how much effort is clearly put into each panel and page. Awesome work on all of that. Those may also be some of the pointy-est noses I've seen on a pony. While I prefer rounded snouts, I do like your visual style and trying unique things out. The backgrounds are a step up in quality as are the many many different angles you drew this in. Shading even! Colors are great! I am truly impressed with all the work you did here. The sneezing fits she had from these sneezy temptations were super! I really liked seeing those sneeze break downs frame by frame. Her sneezes look so wet!

[Wolfwood]

Margo has a returned, a bit different then the Margo I remember, but I like it a lot. You did a great job on this comic. I cannot believe how many pages this was, it's a ton! Great sneezes! That was probably my favorite parts, the sneezing.  But I totally appreciated the world building going on too.  It was a little strange to see this rabbit fella attack her to make her sneeze, and I am truly wondering why this is the case, but I am going to come up with a conspiracy theory that Darrin and Smiles run a dark organization to make everyone at PSF sneeze.   Actually... it's probably just Darrin doing all this.  Because Smiles sneezed in the previous comic. Awesome stuff!

[Grapefoot]

I have gone through this slowly, panel by panel, page by page.  It is fantastic.  You did a wonderful job on it.   Great sneezing fit break down.  You really know how to knock a character down and ground them to be humble and you do it all through SNEEZES!

[Soda]

This is SO good! From beginning to the end, I treasured this comic.  It's silly and has tons of great sneezes.  So why is this TRAIL forbidden?  I sense something shady about this trail.  Is there some deeper lore to this or is it just nonsense?  Great comic!  Margo's kinda a snobby brat about not sneezing too.  Just had to point that out. I think I like her more humble, nervous personality when she is sneezy.

[Tüsszent]

What a huge comic you have here. I really like this and it's pretty funny and absurd what is happening. A bunny rabbit is making a pony sneeze. I guess my only gripe is how pointy the nose is on the mares. I like some roundness personally, but that is just personal taste. I do love how you drew the mane, the eyes, and did all the colouring. You put a lot of work in to this and I can tell because it is very large and very good. Nice job.

[Graymist]

Superb comic! Thoroughly enjoyed reading through this and how wild it became. It started out so normal then went right off the deep end and never came back, lol! It was great! Awesome work on all the poses too. It takes time. Loved the sneezes! You did awesome!!

[TheBeesSneeze]

This is great! Awesome work on all of this.  I was certainly entertained.   Let's see, she sneezed... one, two... four... five... A LOT! She sneezes a lot! Hahaha! I love how hard she tries to fight it too.  Awesome work on a growing collection of your sneeze art portfolio! It's some of my favs!

[Erudork]

This is such an interesting premise!! And this comic must have taken a ton of work. The *deathstare music* moment made me chuckle. XD
Thank you for sharing!

[Darrin]

Margo had a lot of sneezing to make up for, so this does it I am sure! I cannot put into words how fun this was to read! Excellent comic!

[Bumble]

Those nostrils flare out so much! I love what you did with this and the colors match nicely. I quite enjoyed her sneezing fits, it was like her breaking down, lol.  I also noticed the little touches such as sneezing out the irritant on page six.  It's a great comic! Saving all of this.   I also liked the green eye shadow which matched her adorable little scarf.

[flemishcap]

Awww, I actually felt bad for Margo there at the end.  She was crying over it.   Why did you give me so many emotions?  Humor, energy from the action sequences, then sadness! Lovely work on this massive endeavor.

[EvergreenPinewood]

This was a fantastic endeavor you did.  It's massive and sneezy!  Awesome work.

Is there lore behind this?  Who is the bad guy?  Why are they the bad guy? Are they even a bad guy?  lol.

[Anyponedrawn]

This comic brings back so many great memories of reading it.  Been over a year.