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« on: 2024-06-22 16:44:35 »

Another drabble turned into a comic, this is for Mysterysneeze's contest so enjoy!

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« Reply #1 on: 2024-06-22 16:45:36 »


It's summer, and Skyiler has taken his family to the Black Valley Amusement Park.

They just got past the entrance, Olivia and Benjamin were walking beside their parents while Hikaree was sitting on Skyiler's shoulders pointing at everything
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« Reply #2 on: 2024-06-22 16:46:18 »



Aiyame smiled at her fiance and kissed his cheek "This was a great idea honey" She said, Skyiler smiled back and kissed her back "Yeah this will be great" then he felt Benjamin tug at his arm “Adapa”

The hybrid looked down at his son "Hm?"

Benji points at a vending booth "I wanna throw a ball"
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« Reply #3 on: 2024-06-22 16:47:16 »



Skyiler looked over at the vendor booth, it was one of the 'knock the bottles over and win a prize' game.

Benji smiles big "They got robots!"

Hikaree points "Balls!" 

The hybrid chuckled "Sure let's go there first" They went over to the booth "How much for a round?"

The vendor girl smiles "10 pulir* please!" Skyiler paid the clerk


*pulir is the currency where they live
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« Reply #4 on: 2024-06-22 16:48:19 »



Benji smiles as he was given five balls to throw at the bottles that were stacked as a pyramid "Thank you ma'm!"
The girl smiles "Keliwa, kid!"

The little boy threw one ball, missed, another ball, missed... It really didn't go well, he was down to his last ball.

*Keliwa = Good luck
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« Reply #5 on: 2024-06-22 16:49:04 »



He was down to the last ball, gearing up to throw it while his family is cheering him on.

Hikaree was gripping onto Skyiler's hair "Go go! Big bwothew!"

Olivia was leaning forward "C'mon you can do it!"

Skyiler focuses on his son "You got this Benji, focus on the center"

Just then a flower floats down and lands on his nose along with a flower petal.

The hybrid's nose start to twitch and he sniffs a couple of times, slowly feeling the effect from the pollen in the flower.

His eyes go wide and he looks at his nose seeing the flower "HM?!" he sniffs more and huffs, his eyes begin to water, his cheeks and muzzle start to flush "Oh no... oh no... crap!" he thinks to himself
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« Reply #6 on: 2024-06-22 16:49:45 »



He moves his hand up and rubs his nose unable to speak much, his words are whispered stutters "Hh... *Huff* Hnng... *Sniff* Caah... Cad't hhh... hold back..." He huffs then he realizes *Shit! Oh no... I forgot to take the wind meds... fffuuuck...*


Hikaree looks down at her dad as she notices he's acting weird "Daddy okay?" Then she sees the flower on his nose and his muzzle wrinkling up "Oh no! Flowew on nose!"


Skyiler's eyes waters and slowly squeezes shut, his cheeks and muzzle are flushed, trying really hard.


Benji lifts the ball ready to throw.


Just then the urge to sneeze overtakes the hybrid, he only manages to say "Hh... Hiikareeh... hold od... tight..."

The little girl clings onto her daddy's head "Uh oh! Daddy gonna sneeze"

Then as his breath hitches and his chest heaves he moves his left hand up and secures his daughter.

*Sniff* "Hh... hiiihh... hiiheehh..." He huffs and as he opens his mouth wide he inhales deep.


"Haaa... HAH!" Then he doubles over cupping his hand over his muzzle *HAEH'KSHUUH!!* The sneeze creates a strong gust of wind flying forward.


He managed to coil his tail around Aiyame before he sneezed, Olivia clinged to his leg while Hikaree manages to hold onto his head and doesn't fall off


Aiyame looks over "Oh my" while Olivia yips and Benji eeps as he is knocked over.


The sneeze sent the ball crashing into the pyramid and knocked the backdrop of the booth over.
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« Reply #7 on: 2024-06-22 16:50:26 »



As Skyiler recovers from the sneeze, he sees the destruction in front of him.
Aiyame giggles and as she sweeps his braid back after it flopping over and hangs down front "Bless you dear"

Hikaree pets his forehead and giggles "Teehee! That was fun! Bwess you daddy!"

Skyiler blushes a little rubbing his nose "Ugh... Thags" He sniffles and blinks his still watering eyes but the effects from the flower is quickly wearing off.


The vendor girl corrects her cap and hair "Oh wow! Bless you sir!"

Benji laughs "Bless you adapa!"

Then he turns to the vendor girl "Does that count ma'm!"

The girl giggles "Yes! Here you go kid" she hands him a robot

The boy's face lights up "YAY! Thank you!"
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« Reply #8 on: 2024-06-22 16:51:07 »



As they continue to walk, Skyiler brings out a vial from his pocket, removes the cap and chugs the bright blue liquid *The wind medicine that makes the wind element much weaker*

Benji skips next to his dad and giggles "Hehe, Thank you adapa!"

The hybrid glances down at his son while chugging the medicine "You're welcome..." meanwhile Hikaree snuggles her face into his hair
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« Reply #9 on: 2024-06-22 22:15:12 »

Do his kids or wife carry these powerful sneezing traits? Well done on the comic.
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« Reply #10 on: 2024-06-23 04:36:24 »

Do his kids or wife carry these powerful sneezing traits? Well done on the comic.

Benji develops his dad's allergies as he grows older, his sneezes are a bit more... chilly as his main element is ice/frost
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« Reply #11 on: 2024-07-26 09:09:02 »

I GOT SECOND PLACE!!!!
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« Reply #12 on: 2024-07-26 11:40:03 »

Thank you for taking time doing this entry :) I appreciate what you did. Honestly I am not sure why you made a comment today before I posted the contest place prize post on Deviantart soon but no worries XD

In all seriousness I am happy I can host these contests when I am able to.
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« Reply #13 on: 2024-07-27 01:02:04 »

Thank you for taking time doing this entry :) I appreciate what you did. Honestly I am not sure why you made a comment today before I posted the contest place prize post on Deviantart soon but no worries XD

In all seriousness I am happy I can host these contests when I am able to.


Person get excited, haven't placed that high before
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