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« on: 2026-02-19 21:19:54 »

I forgot all about this until I found the comic yesterday ;D ;D

A special gift for all of my new friends on the PSF Forum.  I hope you enjoy it :nervoussmile: .

Rarity was working late one night in her shop the Carousel Boutique when she heard some noise coming from the front part of the shop.  At first she thought it was Spike stopping by for a late night visit.  Occasionally he would do this, hoping he could convince his long time crush to take a romantic walk in the moonlight with him.
Rarity opened the door to the front of the shop a crack, just enough so she could peak through and see what was going on.  All she could make out was a couple of other pony's dressed all in black searching the front room. Suddenly she heard one of them speak, "it’s not here. Her secret designs must be in the back room". A wave of fear crashed over Rarity as she saw the two dark figures heading for the door that she was just behind. Quickly she went into the first display case in her shop and took the place of one of the manikins. Right then she saw the door open and the two figures walk in. Rarity stood as still as possible as she watched the two figures start to go through all of her files.  Suddenly Anthony, a new character to the my little pony universe appeared just above Rarity.  He looked down into her display and saw her hiding. “Hey little pony” he said in a mischievous sounding voice, “how about some pepper?” With that he took out a small pepper shaker and began to sprinkle it down onto Rarity’s  nose. Quickly her body was covered in a thin layer of sweat. Her heart began to pound in her chest as she could feel a ticklish sensation come over her nose. Pepper the poor pony thought to her self. Not pepper that will make me sneeze! Rarity could feel her eyes begin to tear up as the tingling in her nostrils became much more intense. Sweat beaded up on her forehead and began to run into her eyes. Anthony looked down enjoying all of the ponies growing sneezy misery. Rarity’s nostrils began to flare and twitch.  The more her nostrils flared the more the pepper was able to float deeper into her nasal cavities.  This caused the pony’s nose to begin to run. Rarity’s  eyelids began to hover halfway open as her lower jaw began to fall slack. Helpless against it she began to feel her chest expander as she began to draw in more and more air. She could feel a powerful sneeze beginning to grow. She fought against her sneeze with every ounce of her being but her need to sneeze was way too powerful. Ahh, AHHH, AHHH. Rarity's building sneeze became audible. The two intruders stopped what they were doing to listen. “Do you hear that” the one said to the other.  The other pony replied “it sounds like somebody is in here and that somebody needs to sneeze !” At this point Rarity couldn’t take anymore. Her nostrils flared as wide as possible while her nose dripped. Finally her eyes closed tight as her nose burst with a powerful sneeze giving her away AA, AACHOOOOW!

https://imgur.com/a/NH4Fidg
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« Reply #1 on: 2026-02-20 00:17:17 »

That is a very messy sneeze!  Nice find!
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« Reply #2 on: 2026-02-20 12:12:27 »

Sneezy Rarity! Win!
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« Reply #3 on: 2026-02-21 07:46:12 »

Female sneeze art from Daphine? What a pleasant surprise! Sure, pony nostrils may not be able to get particularly huge like those on Scooby or Maximus (if we don't count the MLP episode with the massive nostril flare from Applejack in response to the smell of timberwolves ;)), but as a guy, I've always been biased in favor of female nostrils. :nervoussmile:
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« Reply #4 on: 2026-02-21 16:14:14 »

Nice find! I am very happy to see some pony and female sneezing from your! Nice work!

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« Reply #5 on: 2026-02-21 21:05:48 »

Nice find! I am very happy to see some pony and female sneezing from your! Nice work!


Female sneeze art from Daphine? What a pleasant surprise! Sure, pony nostrils may not be able to get particularly huge like those on Scooby or Maximus (if we don't count the MLP episode with the massive nostril flare from Applejack in response to the smell of timberwolves ;)), but as a guy, I've always been biased in favor of female nostrils. :nervoussmile:
Sneezy Rarity! Win!
That is a very messy sneeze!  Nice find!

Soda, Crimson Crest, Rainberry & MasterXtreme , you are all very welcome.  I wrote this short story and drew the art to go with it about 4 years ago. Crimson Crest, you were right, it was hard to draw the pony's nostrils not to mention make any changes to them but I did my best to get the job done.  Soda, this is my only pony art (so far) but I have done some female art and stories in the past.  Have you seen my Susan and Agent Sonya works?
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« Reply #6 on: 2026-02-22 17:16:23 »

Nice one! Thank you.  I feel like you've shared this before, but I could be wrong. It just rings a bell in my mind.
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« Reply #7 on: 2026-02-22 17:55:25 »

Great sneeze! So messy. She's an absolute mess!
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« Reply #8 on: 2026-02-22 19:32:19 »

Nice one! Thank you.  I feel like you've shared this before, but I could be wrong. It just rings a bell in my mind.

Great sneeze! So messy. She's an absolute mess!

You are very welcome Grapefoot and you are right I drew this picture and wrote the short story about four years ago.

Thank you TheBeesSneeze, she was messy kind of like my Scooby Doo artwork.
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« Reply #9 on: 2026-03-06 12:44:29 »

What a sneezy explosion!

That general guy is the most stereotypical general I could ever imagine! It's perfect, lol! :D
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« Reply #10 on: 2026-03-06 15:28:43 »

What a sneezy explosion!

That general guy is the most stereotypical general I could ever imagine! It's perfect, lol! :D

Thank you, I'm so glad you liked him ;D
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