Coco Pommel's Sick Sneeze (F)

[Silverwing]

2 versions.  What started out as a grim dark doodle became a comic.

So in the episode, "The Saddle Row Review," I always felt that some of Coco's sneezes looked very strange, especially when her mouth was a "O."  So I changed that a little bit and added some creative "juices" to the scene.  There is some mess.

Coco Pommel's Sick Sneeze

Coco's Sneeze of Doom < This one destroys Rarity.

[Death Blossom]

The doom one I was expecting the typical bone to be showing and a little smoke trickling from the neck haha. Like in the old cartoons. But wow, Coco needs to learn to cover her mouth! Was a gross hoers. Really funny. Great expressions, even if they're taken kinda from the show I like the added lip tremble. I think your creative juices were really flowing haha. Can't wait to add this, Coco doesn't have a lot of art. Only like 2 pieces. Only one that's actually sneeze, besides this one.

[Silverwing]

I do have a version that was pretty nasty with a bone... but I didn't keep it.  lol.

Yeah, there were pretty much direct mimics of the scene.

[Soda]

Oh my gosh, YES!   This looks way better then her sneeze from the show.  Such a nasty pone though, not covering at all.  That surprised me in the episode too, because she seems like she would be well mannered.  Guess not in sneezing. 

Lol!  These are great, the first one I see you toned down gore and just made her like dust blowing away. 

[Death Blossom]

Coco is a gross. Although, no other pony has ever covered their sneezes. Maybe it's just not in ponies manners to cover? Because yeah... Every pony that's sneezed, even Rarity, just sneezes out in the open like gross animals.

You mean the second one haha, just dust. Whooooosh. I woulda died if you did just the cartoony bone. Such an old school trope.

[Silverwing]

So I did d a doodle that was like five panels... and it had Rarity's head literally ripping off.  It was very lazy sketch.... but I thought it would have been too nasty to share.  I didn't save it. 

I would say Vapor Trail sort of blocked her sneeze.

[Soda]

I really want to see that now, lol! 

[Death Blossom]

Sort of? I saw it kind of her body pinching in on itself. But besides her... Yeah.

[Miggs]

Ponies just don't cover their damn noses. Tsk tsk. They need to carry tissues with them.

Also RIP in peace Rarity.

These are top notch, Silver! I personally think you kinda fixed the original sneeze, tbh. The whole O thing was kinda weird looking. Not BAD but just kinda weird. But your style, the way you drew it, I like it waaaaaaaaay more. Although I'm not for sneezing on someone, that mess tho *thumbs up*.

[Silverwing]

Vapor Trail.  She blocked her sneeze, kind of.   She turned away...

[Miggs]

Looked like she was raising her hoof too

[Silverwing]

Ponies just don't cover their damn noses. Tsk tsk. They need to carry tissues with them.

Also RIP in peace Rarity.

These are top notch, Silver! I personally think you kinda fixed the original sneeze, tbh. The whole O thing was kinda weird looking. Not BAD but just kinda weird. But your style, the way you drew it, I like it waaaaaaaaay more. Although I'm not for sneezing on someone, that mess tho *thumbs up*.

I really worked on some mess in a future picture!  I tried to get mess down to your levels of intricacy, but it's hard, and I still don't think I did.  Thanks so much for the kind words, my friend.

[Soda]

She attempted, she raised her hoof, but didn't fully cover it. 

[Death Blossom]

Turning away is still sneezing in the open. You just don't sneeze on people. Which is only what Coco did. Rarity kinda turns away at times too, but it's still in the open.

[Soda]

So Coco's a sick little bitch then for sneezing several times openly on Rarity.  What a pig!