Lumpy Gets His Nose Tickled (M, Happy Tree Friends)

[sarahgirl]

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[Anyponedrawn]

Nostrils grew and flared!  I liked his expression on the first panel too.  Good work.  Even showed some force of the sneeze by moving him forward in panel three. 

[Soda]

Aw, cute comic, Sarah.  I like how you make comics.  All very cute.  You have enough for a mini book of Lumpy sneezes. 

[RainySunshine]

Nice job. 

I challenge you on the next one to experiment on how you draw the "sneeze wind" blowing out of the mouth and nose.  Instead of just lines, see if maybe some swirls, some spray droplets, or other things can come into play.  It will further challenge you and even help you improve even more.  If lines are your thing, then by all means, keep doing them.  But see if you can break that mold and at least try something different!

You're doing great, Sarah.  Each drawing improves from the last.

[Smiles2us]

Nicely done once again, Sarah!  Cute comic.