PSF Chat

[Death Blossom]

So... How do you plan on going about pitching?

[MasterXtreme]

Like what do you want to do, Blurr?  Do you have stories for a certain demographic you are aiming for? 

[Blurr]

And I've shown it to River before. here. This is my idea.

GDocs

[Death Blossom]

Can we maybe- fudge it I'll do it. I hate when pages get expanded by long links.

But yeah I recall.

[Death Blossom]

If you want I can try retyping that long ass review and suggestions I have for it.
But I'll be clear and honest, they were very blunt.

Like right of the bat, I'll be honest. It just sounds like the retelling of the story of NMM when Celestia is the one who went bad, just with changed names. Like. Honestly.

[Captain Ridiculous]

Oh wow, see, you got a lot of material there and it is well laid out and organized!  You will need to get a professional proof reader, something my cousin does for Disney/ writer for them. 

[Blurr]

Right now.......all I want is to sleep.....

[Death Blossom]

Then sleep bro.

[MasterXtreme]

Now that is a lot of work Blurr.  You have put a lot of effort and work into that, I haven't read it, but I see so many pages and it looks organized.  Good to see you have something.  Just be prepared to have people probably make you re-write it a hundred time, lol!  But it so cool you have something so in depth already. 

[Anyponedrawn]

Go to sleep, Blurr. 

But awesome you have all that. 

[MasterXtreme]

my cousin does for Disney/ writer for them.

How'd she get there?

[Blurr]

I'm sorry if I came off as a jerk tonight guys.....I'm just scared. I just don't want to be stuck in Fresno for the rest of my life in a job like this for the rest of my life. HOpefully one day I'll get there.

[Captain Ridiculous]

This will make Blurr feel confident.  She went to college for it for many years, but got lucky.  It is contracted, but they have extended her contract in working with them many times already.  She even gets to do it locally and not have to be in California.  She also gets some pass to Disney resorts or something and for her family.

[Death Blossom]

That's another thing. If people suggest things you can't be stubborn and be like "but no this is how I want it!!!" Because yeah, proofreaders are from outside your head, and are gonna tell you things that don't come off that great or just aren't as a good an idea as you thought them. You have to be open to change.

[Death Blossom]

This will make Blurr feel confident.  She went to college for it for many years, but got lucky.

But that's just it. She went to college for it.  There in lies the difference. All these people went to school specifically for this field. Some got lucky, some not.