[COMPLETED] Kushun Maid - An original story (OC - F)

[Ynona]

So I was working on this for a while now. Some people started asking me for original content for a change instead of doing fan art all the time.
I had a couple of problems with this: First, I didn't want to use my already existing OCs for these things. Second, I was kinda embarrassed on creating a new OCs from scratch.
But after a nice random chat with @LovesSneezingApparently about quality anime projects, a small concept for an original story was born. I liked the idea and I felt inspired by it so I started working on it. After a few really successful sketches and a few months of work, the first chapter of this story was finally completed.

I present to you: Kushun Maid!


Cover made by @System423, you can find the speedpaint here. Thanks, man!!


Part 1


Part 2

I worked a lot on this. I hope you guys like it!

I don't know when I'll be able to do a second chapter for this... and I can't promise the next chapters are going to be this huge as this one.
But now that the introductions for the characters are done, I can promise that the next chapters are going to be more sneezy.

Edit: I'll add the future new chapters here too.

Chapter 2:
[Cover - Speedpaint] - Part 1 -Part 2 - Part 3

Chapter 3:
Cover - Part 1 - Part 2 - Part 3

Extra Content:
Sleepy Misaki - Thug Misaki 1 - Rain
Sick Misaki: 1 - 2 - 3
Chirstmas Special: Cover - Comic

[Crocoze]

I love this!! Really cute character btw!

[LovesSneezingApparently]

Fantastic!! It’s packed; you really came up with a ton of ideas for this! Excellent work!   

That’s a super good Miyazaki, as well. 

[MasterXtreme]

I truly think this is the best thing I've seen from you.  I truly do.  I like the original character design and I like what you've written and drawn!  Top notch stuff!

[RainySunshine]

I cannot tell you enough how much I love your work on this.  I can feel your passion you put into this.  It shows.  I truly like it a lot.

[Rainberry]

I'm sensing some inner truth with this comic about yourself maybe?  I absolutely adore this.  It's adorbs!  I don't want to in any way pressure you, but if you continue this, I am totally a follower!  I love it and the characters are cuuuuuuttte! 

[Anyponedrawn]

Oh wow!  I love this.  I love how you are building up the story and getting us to start something grand!  I really like what you have here and look forward to it's future.   I know it's a ton of work to do stuff like this, so great job.  I totally can see this becoming something that could get a following... especially amongst ya know... sneeze fetish folk.... but it could go beyond that! 

Great work and I would be proud of it if I was you.

[Soda]

This is fantastic, Ynona!  I could totally get involved reading something like this.  You've set it up so well to tell a story.

I am curious these two relationships even more now!  I am curious how he knows she sneezes so easily and why does she sneeze so much?  Must know!

[Ynona]

You guys have no idea how happy I am to see such a positive reaction from this particular project. I wasn't expecting this at all!
Thank you everyone!

I'm sensing some inner truth with this comic about yourself maybe?

In some parts, yes... Usually the most boring ones.

[Darrin]

I love this.  I really do.... but.... what are their names?  Girl is Misaki... the guys name?

And of course this would get praise!  It is freaking awesome!

[Ynona]

I love this.  I really do.... but.... what are their names?  Girl is Misaki... the guys name?

And of course this would get praise!  It is freaking awesome!

His name is Sato. His friend in the first half says his name. Kinda hidden, I know. In the next chapter I'm going to make his name more clear!

[Anyponedrawn]

I've read this through a few times and I really can't credit you enough on it.  I love the set up.  I wanna know more about them both.  I wanna know why the girl sneezes so much too!  I kinda want her to explain it to him or tell him why and see how uncomfortable she is about it... I'm a bad person.  

Sorry, I'm not trying to make you feel pressured.  It's just very good!

[Ynona]

Sorry, I'm not trying to make you feel pressured.  It's just very good!

It's ok. I understand. It's just that you guys have to be patient for a while. I was able to do this project thanks to the Christmas break. I really have no idea when I'll be able to make part 2...
But I'm really really happy for this warm response! ^^

[Kiwi]

Aw luv!  This is rockin'!  A great comic start for sure!  Really worthy of a good story to go with the rest of it.  I'm frilled you showed this to us.

[Miggs]

Misaki is best girl.

While I already toldja my thoughts on the comic, I might as well put 'em here.
I'm still loving how everything turned out. Again, it just looks a lot smoother and different than a few other works, it's great. And the characters of course are able to shine with some parts of their personality!